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Post  MaehlHoldings on Thu Mar 24, 2011 3:10 am

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President Ragman,

I was reviewing your original proposal for Maxi Provo 9, and I respect the ideas that you presented to the Banking Guild. They were sound insofar as it related to creating a solid defensive position to allow a natural growth of the economy on the planet.

My associates at Flag Staff and I were able to create a more robust plan for the planet and won the bid. However, I do not want that to detract from the merits of your proposal. In fact, many points you brought forth could still be implemented, as they do not necessarily fall into the specialty of either myself or Flag Staff Inc. I therefore ask you to present a revised proposal to us, so that we may review their merits and perhaps do business together.

I warn you, the planet is a member of the Free Systems, which is non-negotiable. Furthermore, I offer you this opportunity without necessarily bringing the matter first to my associates. Please pardon the faux-pas, as I can't resist bringing people together for mutual benefit. I can't help but think that you have the potential to create significant revenue for this planet and help improve the lives of its inhabitants. I'm sure that if we are presented a business ventures that will be mutually beneficial to all involved parties, my partners won't be offended by my actions and will see the merits of my invitation.

Nothing ventured, nothing gained, President Ragman. I hope you accept my invitation.

Yours sincerely,
Su Maehl, CEO
Maehl Holdings


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Post  GeneralGarminFe on Thu Mar 24, 2011 9:02 pm

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President Ragman,

We at Flag Staff Inc. endorse the above proposal and would gladly accept the presence of your specialists on our planet. We however wish to leave the logistics of any offers made to our partners, Maehl Holdings. So please post all inquires directly to them.

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Post  PresidentRagman on Sat Mar 26, 2011 6:00 am

Gentlemen,

here is what i can offer you at this time.

1 - Aid in Building and Equiping a full space port with repair facilities. i suggest using local Workforce to do primary construction and staffing. we can pay toi bring in specialists to train local candidates for the postions.

2 - Wil provide either a space station or moon base for improve control over local space. we offer to staff it with specialists and ask for local oversights

3 - we will provide a cadre force of soldiers to train local militia and provide basic security at the space port and moon base


the only thing is that some of the specialists, i have are members of the Estrain. More specifically they are Mangavores, with a few standard estrain to aid in construction. The troops will be immutables with some Leyas user specialists

if this will be a problem let me know and we can negotiate replacements..

in return for this aid, we request trade rights with Maxa Provo and future options to remain open for discussion.


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Post  GeneralGarminFe on Sun Mar 27, 2011 3:34 am

[Encoded Message Fragment to Maehl Holdings]

The presence of E-Strain would make the IR very hostile to the colony should they be discovered. Concealment of their presence or replacement specialists should be preferred.
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Post  PresidentRagman on Mon Mar 28, 2011 12:28 am

Sirs,

i understand and respect your views. we will therefore only be sending non Estrain personnel at this time. we would not want to jepordize your relationships with any other faction. In fact, we will insist on all of our personel being scanned by your forces to ensure our compliance. there may be some crew members on our transport that are magnavores but they will not be landing on the planets and will stay on the vessel in orbit.

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Post  MaehlHoldings on Fri Apr 01, 2011 12:00 am

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President Ragman,

While I love your enthusiasm, per the Treaty of 2218, we cannot harbor any members of the E-strain. It bothers me significantly as it is a stumbling block in our negotiation. I love your proposal otherwise. There's plenty of land for development, and as there is a treaty between the Free Systems and the EEF, I have no qualms with utilizing this planet as a regional hub for your mercantile and, when necessary, military exercises.

Therefore, as so long as the E-strain does not make themselves known to others and remain on their ships in orbit, I do not anticipate any problems. You are, thusly, entitled to tariff-free trade relations with Maxa Provo 9. Your ships will have access to this space and, more specifically, you can purchase all items available on Maxa Provo 9 without utilizing Maehl Holdings as your logistics coordinator. As an added bonus, if there are services available on-planet that is serviced through either holding corporation, you will be entitled to a hometown discount for our services. This discount is only available directly through Maxi Provo 9 and is not valid on any deliveries made to you at other locations. In return, we, Flag Staff Inc and Maehl Holdings, expect the same courtesies.

In return, you will fulfill your proposal accordingly, be provided property rights on planet and lobby our governing council accordingly for any specific needs. Please be mindful you and your people are subject to Free Systems law here, whereby violations of law are immediately subject to the proper penalties therein. While you may be entitled to handle the matter internally by the laws of the EEF, we reserve all rights to prosecute accordingly.

Thank you for your proposal, and we look forward to working with you in our endeavors.

Yours sincerely,
President of Maxa Provo 9,
on behalf of Su Mael, CEO, and Flag Staff, Inc
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